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Walking - sijo?
Is this acceptable as a sijo?WalkingGrey air in the morning, cold and damp in ancient, fragile lungs.                   ...
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ah, davie ... I'm not the expert round here ... but it works for me! I love the image of your closing line -- beautiful! nice work ... I enjoyed this ...And if I look a little older ... it's just...
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Works for me too! Great images, nice twist at the end...very good! Just a pointer, not a criticism, as it is a very good piece, but a word on the rhythm of the sijo; because Korean is a tonal...
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